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Nightmare pg3

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Page 3 up and ready for viewing. It's so nice to see a finished project posted when it is complete.

If you feel inclined too, please comment or critique.
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RocketShoes's avatar
The power just flicks on in the last panel, right? Try putting a question mark in her dialogue instead of the period. Right, no...power? I'd suggest turning her head in towards the room or up towards the lights as well to reinforce the shocking moment. : ) Love the pacing.